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Post by Poet on Nov 5, 2012 16:14:02 GMT -5
Wow, your app looks fantastic! You definitely know Tasmia extremely well, and it's very clear in all of your writing! I can't wait to see you out here!
However, I do have one thing you need to fix, alright? Currently, we're at the very beginning of the Legion history, making this our own Legion Earth, so I'm going to have to ask you to rewrite the things that have to do with the Legion. Right now, she's just joined, thus quite a bit of her history will have to go, as would any skills or the like that she has learned at the Legion. Of course, considering it's allowed for characters to be blends of multiple versions, her personality changes and skills can stand as you have them written, but they cannot be referencing the Legion, okay? Cause she's brand new~!
Lemme know when you're done, and I'll take another look, alright~? It's a fantastic app, though, wonderful! Glad to have you here! |
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Post by Poet on Nov 9, 2012 12:35:28 GMT -5
Awesome, thanks for the changes! I'm pleased to say that you're now:
ACCEPTED! |
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